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Aplus美語全台唯一email英文作文改寫課程

 

隨著學習英文的方向已調整為越來越重視學生真正的英文素養內涵的情況下,英文寫作已日趨重要,不論是升學考試的英文作文與翻譯、各種英文檢定的寫作項目,或是申請學校、工作職位所需的自傳與讀書計畫,甚至是未來就業時須與國外客戶溝通的商業書信往來等,都需要具備英文寫作的能力。因此,Aplus美語提供學生寫作與Email改寫的課程,透過老師上課的寫作引導,給予寫作的思考方向與句型運用,再加上固定的寫作練習,並於練習後由老師親自批改與回覆,透過如此有規律的訓練,學生的寫作能力將能有效地獲得提升。

 

以下為Aplus美語的高中生Zony平常的寫作練習與老師的批改回覆,僅透過以上方式有規律地訓練後,在沒有特別準備的情況下,即於學校的英文寫作比賽中,榮獲1的佳績。目前對Zony而言,英文寫作已非難事,120字以上並有組織、內容的文章已能與短時間內完成。對於此訓練方式,Zony同學也分享了她的學習心得,有關課程的詳細內容,請撥:04-2326-7868

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Zony同學對於email寫作訓練的學習心得:

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以下為Zony寫作練習並經由老師批改過後的內容:

(批改紅字為錯誤處)

 

When it comes to English, everyone knows that it is a necessary skill nowadays. But why should people learn English? I think that is not merely because it is a global language. What if we look at it from another perspective; that is, what would it be like if we were not equipped with the ability, English.

More than 50 percent of information online was written in English. Not equipping yourself with the skill could influence you a lot. Moreover, one-third of countries and regions make English an official or native language. Since 171 countries use English, we could travel and do business over the world easily. To me, English is an elegant and beautiful language which brings me great convenience in my daily life. I strongly believe that leaning English is a high return investment.

 

以下為批改完後的同時,老師回覆Zony此篇寫作練習之評語與建議:

 

Dear Zony,

It is through our frequent writing practice that we may become more aware of how to interpret things at will and with accuracy. This level, though hard to achieve, can be attained via our persistent devotion to learning English. More important is that you have to equip yourself with more willingness to have an intertwined relationship with English so that English is going to be viewed as your top priority. Driven by this great momentum, you will be very willing to get along with English whenever possible. Wish you a good day.

 

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